River of the dead-part 2

Suddenly, the sun swept out from behind a cloud. The river begain to dry. A cloud hid the sun once more.The river began to build up. Soon, the ground began to crack. The water was splitting it up like a wood spliter . The earth trembled just as Melvin did. The shaking woke up the army. One man ran toward a cave that was cracking into bits! One man backed away from the river. A crack opened and the man fell through! Suddenly the running soldier came out riding something enormous! It was a dragon!
It blew its flames . The river began to evaporate from the intense heat. Water splashed everywere. Suddenly, the river dissapeared! The dragon began to walk back to its cave. It steped into a puddle. It right then immeadiatly died! "We" Melvin said, "have to get away from here". That was that. The Army, battered and brused, begain to march away.